Feeback #1

From this feedback we have decided to cut down the shot where the boy wonders infront of the camera, we have also corrected our grammar in the text at the start. What we haven't cut is the scene where he is being laughed at, this is because I think that the shallow depth of field and hand held camera does show a sense of disorientation and although it may not be evident to some people that the is on the floor, I quite like the artistic aspect of the shot and therefore I want to keep it. What I have done is desaturated the colours slightly and made it slow motion so that it fits in more nicely with the rest of the promo in terms of image and colouring.