Feedback #2

We have taken this feedback into consideration and this has really brought my attention into how crunched our promo needs to be in order to keep the viewer interested. We will try out some different effects on Adobe to see if we can make this 'illusion that his life is falling apart' become more apparent, and I would like to see possibly if we can capture some more footage so we can get rid of the boring bits, such as opening of door handles, as this was said in Ryan Mcfalls interview as being boring. Hopefully after this feedback we can begin to polish up or pop promo to become more suited to our target audience.